Latest installment in collaboration debacle
I caught up with Scott on-line last night. Bottom line? We desperately need a face-to-face. A long one, starting with alcohol and a good fight so we can get down to business.
I took the idea from the last chat and ran with it. I got the touch-down (almost 6,000 new words) and was heading toward the field goal when I got clotheslined. (Edited to remove spoilers which probably won't be in the final product anyway. The black type is clarification or you'll be hopelessly lost. I was at first, and I've been writing the silly thing.)
SC: well I read what you sent and I liked it, just a slight problem maybe
EJ: what?
SC: well what I wrote a while back about Stephan not getting sacked in the first place
SC: She won the battle
EJ: Did Gravity help her win?
SC: remember she allowed for Gravity to help and before she was attacked by him (it was a military exercise, to test Stephan's forces) she saw the attack from Parek and defeated her (Parek's) forces badly
SC: you don't remember talking about this in a previous chat
EJ: not about Stephan winning the battle, no
SC: I have the whole thing written
EJ: shit
SC: Let me send it to you and see if it refreshes your memory
EJ: please
SC: email sent
Indeed it was sent: The whole document of the cobbled-together manuscript. 204 pages. I almost threw up on the keyboard. Instead, I took a deep breath:EJ: ok, quick question. Can you throw me a bone about how far into this I’m looking?
SC: RED, just before you had Stephan coming out of her coma. (Don't panic. It wasn't a coma; she was wounded and woke up. )
Oh, changing subjects (careful of the whiplash), and before I forget, congratulations to TSgt(Sel) Danny, who gets to remove the (Sel) from his rank as of next Monday. Enjoy your pay raise, my friend. You have earned it many times over.
Labels: Writing